Minus

05 Dec 2013 4 Comments

by Deborah Horton in December 2013, poetry Tags: , ,



Minus you
minus then
minus memories
minus when

Minus touches
minus kissing
minus laughter
minus missing

Minus love
minus lies
minus how
minus whys

Minus guilt
minus pain
minus wrong
minus insane

Minus crying
minus blue
minus forever
minus you

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. peacefulwmn9
    Dec 05, 2013 @ 21:27:22

    Excellent style, great rhyming scheme. An apt reminder that forever is a long time.

    Reply

  2. contoursoflife
    Dec 05, 2013 @ 06:22:39

    Interesting.. the pain still comes through .. well written

    Reply

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