Brown and round large flecks of gold

the kind of thing a person could get lost in

lashes so long they reach for the sky

afraid to look for fear of being lost in them

As if they look right through me

so warm so unafraid seeking out my face

when the sun hits them the gold shines so bright

it takes my breath away

Never really noticed until you were inches from my lips

how they drink in everything around each look a little more

every feeling so expressed inside those lash framed eyes

so easy to fall in one look is all it takes

Feeling them on me turning to see their beauty

never wanting to stop transfixed by the colors

by the emotion wrapped within only wanting more

reach into my soul just a look and I am yours

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Jingle
    Oct 25, 2010 @ 08:30:47


    Thanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, hope to see you in of week 7, our theme is love and romance. Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx


  2. Kick Out The Jams
    Oct 11, 2010 @ 16:43:30

    Really nice Deborah and well written…


  3. Jamie Dedes
    Oct 09, 2010 @ 12:04:39

    A fine romance, finely written. Nice contribution to Rally. Thanks!

    Mine is here:


  4. Jingle
    Oct 07, 2010 @ 13:21:07

    fun piece…
    pleasant to read!


  5. Trisha
    Oct 01, 2010 @ 09:23:58

    fabulous. truly romantic.

    visiting you from JIngle’s TRP – thursday rally for poets.


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