The steps at first small and unsure
and all at once it becomes a blur
loving living sharing your soul
giving taking losing control
Each step on the journey more of the heart
loving together tearing apart
the push the pull always in motion
following the road whatever the notion
It is not the destination or the end
but to our hearts the journey does lend
growing losing becoming ever more
no step that comes like the ones before
The journey teaches reaches breaks molds
never knowing what the future holds
never regret remember always seeking what is true
this journey called life for me and you
Deborah Horton Writing 
Oct 07, 2010 @ 12:16:07
Very very likable! I enjoy ur works!
I am;
http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2010/09/11/memories-rain/
Oct 08, 2010 @ 16:56:56
I’m glad you like it and thank you for reading 🙂
Oct 01, 2010 @ 17:52:30
So well said…how each of us is molded by our journey!
Nice to meet you!
Oct 04, 2010 @ 05:09:30
Thank you, nice to meet you too!
Oct 01, 2010 @ 09:25:34
just awesome deborah. hope you enjoy every second of this journey.
Oct 04, 2010 @ 05:09:16
Thank you 🙂
Sep 29, 2010 @ 13:24:55
Deborah, Your journey is universal in its message and how it resonates to all of us. Thank you.
JP
Sep 29, 2010 @ 15:52:46
Thank you for reading and for commenting 🙂
Sep 27, 2010 @ 07:05:50
Beautiful poem, your words ring so true! This journey called life is a beautiful one, with all the ups and downs 🙂
Sep 27, 2010 @ 07:21:33
It’s the ups and downs that make it interesting 🙂 Thanks for reading!
Sep 26, 2010 @ 08:52:43
what makes the journey irresistible is it’s element of SURPRISE!
Sep 27, 2010 @ 05:46:09
So very true 🙂 Thanks for reading!
Sep 25, 2010 @ 21:19:03
Lovely poem about life’s journey.
Sep 26, 2010 @ 05:38:29
Thank you very much for reading 🙂
Sep 25, 2010 @ 11:48:48
I love this, Deborah! It describes the ups and downs and ins and outs of all of our lives–a constant motion of losing, gaining, learning. Wonderful job…
Sep 26, 2010 @ 05:37:52
Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Sep 25, 2010 @ 09:27:08
Dear Deborah,
Your “Journey” is absolutely beautiful and so well-written. I enjoyed reading it.
Sep 26, 2010 @ 05:37:33
Thank you for reading 🙂
Sep 25, 2010 @ 09:11:24
Oh yes, enjoy the journey! It can take you to the stars! This is a gorgeous image….who wouldn’t want to head down that road? 🙂 heartspell
Sep 26, 2010 @ 05:37:19
Thank you 🙂 I enjoyed yours this week as well 🙂
Sep 25, 2010 @ 09:02:27
Thanks for sharing this, Deborah. I love the way the words just flow with a sense of love.
Sep 26, 2010 @ 05:36:59
Thanks so much for reading 🙂
Sep 25, 2010 @ 08:46:43
“no step that comes like the ones before”
that is so true… that makes the journey all the more fun. expect the unexpected. come to think of it, life is never boring. you’ll never know what will happen next.
thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a nice comment.
Sep 26, 2010 @ 05:36:42
Thank you for stopping by 🙂
Sep 25, 2010 @ 07:49:31
I too a believer. good poem 🙂
Sep 25, 2010 @ 07:52:08
Thank you for reading :))
Sep 24, 2010 @ 19:22:29
I am a fellow believer in “the journey”…not the destination…I’m so happy that our paths have crossed as we continue on this journey!
Inspiring and healing!
http://lovelyannie79.wordpress.com/2010/09/23/portrait-of-a-lady/
Sep 25, 2010 @ 07:27:28
Thank you for coming by to read 🙂
Sep 24, 2010 @ 19:08:51
please let me know after you have done 18 poets visiting and commenting…
Happy Weekend.
Sep 24, 2010 @ 17:32:34
I absolutely love this!!!
Sep 25, 2010 @ 07:27:10
I’m glad you liked it 🙂
Sep 24, 2010 @ 16:12:54
Lovely words…so well written. New love is always like a young child learning to walk; learning to grow.
Sep 25, 2010 @ 07:26:55
Thank you so much and for reading 🙂
Sep 24, 2010 @ 12:16:21
oh.. this is well written.. the only way on is onward 🙂
Rally Week 29, My Poem
Sep 24, 2010 @ 12:32:23
Thank you for reading 🙂 I can’t wait to read your work as well!
Sep 24, 2010 @ 10:15:21
woah!!1 AWESOMENESS 😀
we have so much of writing skills in common. i love you rhyme scheme =)
i love the poem more 😀
it was just beautiful 🙂
Sep 24, 2010 @ 12:32:02
Thank you, so kind of you to say. I can’t wait to read your work and so many others….thank you for reading 🙂
Sep 24, 2010 @ 07:56:07
I loved your journey.. It taught a lot of things.. Great one for Rally..
Rhyming Waters
–Someone Is Special–
Sep 24, 2010 @ 08:13:13
Thank you and thank you for stopping by 🙂
Sep 24, 2010 @ 07:00:29
What a beautiful message in this poem! Tender and true. What a wonderful way to start my day! Thanks.
Sep 24, 2010 @ 08:12:55
So kind of you to say…thank you for reading 🙂
Sep 24, 2010 @ 03:38:22
I love this part:
“The journey teaches reaches breaks molds”
So describes my life at the moment!
Great work 🙂 x
Sep 24, 2010 @ 06:31:50
Glad you liked it…thanks for reading 🙂
Sep 23, 2010 @ 21:13:02
Very nice record of a journey — of love? of life? Either way, I like it.
Sep 24, 2010 @ 06:31:31
Thank you and thank you for reading 🙂
Sep 23, 2010 @ 19:44:58
Our journey had already began!=D Let’s move forward!=P
Sep 24, 2010 @ 06:31:16
Always moving forward …thanks for reading 🙂
Sep 23, 2010 @ 16:50:37
yes, life is a journey,
smooth flow,
beautiful job!
Sep 23, 2010 @ 16:47:22
an revolutionary process,
I can see things emerge and revolve in your words…
Happy Thursday!
love your work.
Sep 24, 2010 @ 06:30:49
Thank you….and thank you for asking me to participate 🙂