Here at the center of my world was where you once did reside
in my heart and soul the place you did abide
there was only you no one else the center of my space
now there’s just an empty whole that once was your place
Once the center of my everything I needed nothing more
where no one else had dared to tread before
let you in until there was nothing left of me
but you were only using and I was too blind to see
The very center of me and all that I held dear
my only thought was how to always keep you near
but you were only lying with every breath I took
with every word, every motion, every single look
Now that center left laid waste is filled with someone new
someone who truly loves me not a pretender like you
they give me everything you never did with love and all that’s real
and now at my center once again I truly feel
Oct 16, 2010 @ 06:14:26
This was painful. Hope it is not you.
Oct 09, 2010 @ 12:09:25
The pretenders! Unfortunately, we’ve all met a few. . . like the repititition here and the use of center as a metaphor. Nice!
Oct 08, 2010 @ 16:44:39
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/08/the-perfect-poet-award-4-poets-rally-week-30/
the perfect poet award for you…
u can still attend rally week 30.
Oct 08, 2010 @ 16:56:27
Thank you for the award 🙂 I don’t see where you get the logos to use though, am I just missing them? Been very busy this week but think I still want to participate in the rally this week, just late. Let me know where to get the logo. Thanks again!
Oct 07, 2010 @ 13:21:31
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/thursday-poets-rally-week-30/
welcome to Poets Rally week 30,
let me know if you have a poem ready,
do nothing otherwise.
Thanks for the support.
Sep 29, 2010 @ 09:42:23
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/09/21/4ever-friends-thursday-poets-rally-week-29/
two awards,
share with 1 to 10 poets you like…
Sep 27, 2010 @ 08:06:43
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html
Hello, friend:
Our Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
Thanks in advance.
Hope to see you soon…
Sep 22, 2010 @ 13:27:11
brave,
love the sentiments and spirits in it.
Sep 22, 2010 @ 18:25:53
Thank you for reading 🙂