I almost said I loved you when you looked at me
those eyes that reached into my soul so deep
again when you stood so close I could smell your skin
almost said the words but no and then
I almost said I loved you when you took my hand
your fingers wrapped in mine I could hardly stand
and as you pulled me closer almost did I speak
but strong I remained even tho I was weak
I almost said I loved you when you kissed me so
soft and sweet long and lingering feeling it tips to toe
again as you kissed me over and over making it hard to breathe
the words almost spilled out I never wanted to leave
I almost said I loved you when you and I were one
wrapped around each other and others there were none
but I kept it hidden deep inside the words in silence held
and now that you are gone it seems it’s just as well
Aug 16, 2011 @ 16:19:59
Spot on Deborah… almost… such a ‘loaded’ word. Can almost feel the breathlessness between the words. I enjoyed reading this, thank you
Aug 15, 2011 @ 13:31:01
So hard to trade Love for desire…Great write, I love it
😉
Aug 15, 2011 @ 17:04:41
Thank you very much my friend 🙂
Aug 15, 2011 @ 07:15:53
O excellent!!!!! I had to smile, a bittersweet one, for sure. You got it absolutely right! Good one, Deborah!!!
Aug 15, 2011 @ 07:43:37
Thanks so much 🙂 Always glad to see you here! I appreciate you reading 🙂